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What is the best television show?

My Opinion

NCIS

Reason                                       Reason                                          Reason

about Navy                             Starts at 8 o'clock                           realistic characters

elab: solves crimes                elab: get to bed early                        elab:  normal and believable

Rough Draft

        The best show on television is NCIS.  It is a show about the Navel Criminal Investigative Services.  It is a group that tries to keep people safe, one of the many things they do is solve murders.  It is a shaw that starts at 8 o’clock at night.  That means I can watch it, and still get to bed early.  Finally, the NCIS charactors are realistic.  They act like everyday, average people, they are really believable.  Of all the television shows out there, NCIS is the best.

         Best Copy

         The best show on television is NCIS.  First, it is a show about the Navel Criminal Investigative Services.  It is a group that attempts to keep people safe, one of the many things they do is solve murders.  Next, it is a show that begins at 8 o’clock at night.  That means I can watch it and still get to bed early enough so I am not too tired at work the next day.  Finally, the NCIS characters are down-to-earth.  They act like everyday, normal people, they are really believable.  Of all the television shows out there, NCIS is the most outstanding.